Letter to my husband advice please!

[dkrk8706]

My husband is currently deployed and he asked me to write him a dirty (but sweet) letter about his home coming. Please give me advise on what you think and be completely honest. Thank ya'll for your help!


I'm lying on the bed. Pretending to be asleep, but you know im only teasing. You run your hands along my thigh and waist, and a shiver rushes up my spine, but i dont move a muscle in my effort to "sleep". You unbutton my shirt and fondle my breasts, tweaking my nipples until they are throbbing for your warm, wet mouth to kiss them. Still, my eyes remain closed. You bring your lips so gently to mine. I can take the wonderful intensity no longer. I must have you. I must feel your body against mine. I draw you to me and kiss you, and savor our love. You look into my eyes, desiring every inch of me. I force your shirt from from your beautiful body, I feel you breathe in the still air wondering what is next...

I turn you around and push you to the couch. You look up at me astonished by my forcefulness. I get down on my knees teasing you slightly. I run my hands from your knees to your upper thighs staring into your eyes watching you full of desire. I want you inside of me, but not quite yet.

I unbutton your pants and pull them off leaving you bare on the sofa. I lean up and kiss your sweet lips once again moving to your neck then to your chest breathing only slightly. Finally Im on my knees again, I look down and reach out. I hear you gasp with shock and delight, as I swirl and circle my hand around the head of your cock til its rock hard. I lick up your cock to the tip and lightly flick my tongue, you moan a little. I take your cock into my mouth entirely, I love the taste of you. I take you deeper into my throat and massage your balls at the same time. You look down into my eyes and breath in rapidly turned on by the sight of your big cock in my mouth. You lean back and close your eyes, enjoying the warmth and wetness. I continue taking it in and out of my mouth deeper. I swirl my tongue and suck. You moan again and I know that means to go faster. I speed up and feel your cock harder and spasm. Suddenly you burst inside my mouth and I take it slightly deeper. Your body twitches in pleasure, I swallow.

You stand and flip me onto the couch. I giggle playfully and notice that gorgeous smile I love on your face. You kiss me intensely, I still feel that spark from our first kiss on the beach so long ago. You move down to my chest and caress my breast and take my nipple into your mouth. You gently suck, you know how that gets me so hot. As you continue I feel one of your soft and slick hands slip down my body. You touch me slightly, then more aggresively as you realize I’m wet. I lose my breath astonished by the pleasure. I forgot how wonderful you are with that. You move your fingers inside of me surprised at how tight I am after all this time. You move further down, kissing my stomach as you lower yourself. I feel your wet tongue searching for my clit. I wiggle, amazed at how fast you are to find it. You move your tongue around in the most incredible ways. My body tenses as you move and press it against me prefectly. You reach up and grab my breasts firmly and move your tongue more forcfully, I begin to twist and turn my body knowing that I cant last much longer. The pleasure is just too over whelming, then it hits me out of no where. My body tightens but you don’t stop. My hot pussy starts to throb as I orgasm.

I breath in deeply and push you off of me, you’re so stubborn. I climb ontop of you, feeling your hard cock below me. I kiss you, tasting my juices, something about that turns me on even more. I grab your shoulders and force your huge cock inside of my tight pussy. It’s the most amazing feeling in a long time. At first we just stay this way cherishing this experience we have both been deprived of for the last several months. You push me further down and it hurts, I moan but you push harder mistaking it for pleasure. But in some strange way that hurt is pleasure. We hold each other so close, it seems unbelievable that we are this close once again. Finally ready for more, I push you backwards and lift up slightly and lower myself again. What an incredible feeling! I begin to go faster, you grab my hips to stop me. You want to savor this moment. You turn me onto my back with you ontop. Our bodies are bare against each other. Your enter me once again with the same intensity of the first time. You look into my eyes renewing our love, you lean down and kiss, then I whisper in your ear “harder baby”. I see the slightest half smile on your face. You begin to fuck me more forcefully. I can feel your huge cock inside of me, pounding. I love it, and I cant help but smile. Oh, how I’ve longed for this, for you. I put my arms around you and pull you harder towards me and into me. You hit the spot. God, I’ve missed that. You continue to do it harder but not faster. After a few more thrusts I know I cant hold it in much longer and I feel you catch your breath and realize you cant either. I look into your eyes and its as though you read my mind, we both let go at that moment. Our bodies spasm together in extasy. I feel you cum inside of me.

We both lay there in each others arms, embracing the closeness we’ve longed for for all this time. We breath in unison, our bodies exhausted. I close my eyes and drift off, finally fulfilling my dream of falling asleep in your arms once again.

[EvilEvilKitten]

Very nice.
But what are you going to write next time?
My point = SAVOR one thing and one thing only a write reams about that one thing. Looking into his eyes for example. What do you see?

Try it.

Sit down and write everything you think, see, and feel about him - about yourself - about you two together past, present and future, when you look into his eyes.

Each week then, pick another aspect and write only about that. His kiss. The touch of his hands. And so on. You see?

That way each installment leads and builds to the next and keeps him SCREAMINGLY HUNGRY for more more more MORE!

He might get so hot that he flies home under his own power!

[DickDragon]

i agree with EEK, being deployed myself me and my wife try to talk to each other online or over the phone as often as possible and from time to time we both enjoy the dirty letters and comments. and to be honest the ones i leave/send to her are about straight up sex, all the kinky things that i can think of doin to her. she sends the same things but she also gets into all the little details, like how it feels when i rub her back, or i kiss her, or i stare into her eyes. and that does alot for me too, just as much as when i get the down and dirty stuff, if you know what i mean. it makes me feel good that she takes that much interest in how i do things to her, and where she can see herself in 10 yrs (still with me, lol). and of course i tell her those things too. and quite frankly i feel it has brought us closer than ever before. so go with that, your example was amazing to (what a lucky guy) and throw in some of the things EEK suggested to, he'll like it, trust me.