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Originally Posted by curious_woman

I'm glad you liked it though, nobody seemed to reply and I was starting to feel I was losing my touch as a writer .

.... I guess mine sucked this thread died until dirty.gurrl posted.

Not at all. Yours was excellent, and my apologies for not commenting. It's admirable for someone to step up and put their work out for the scrutiny of others, you have my praise. I personally thought of crafting my own since I am a bit of a writer, but don't have the words.

And as Ducy said, writing about lesbianism will get you a lot farther with the straight males audiences then hetero (excellent last post, BTW), but write and express for yourself.