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Originally Posted by Knight
Very well written and erotic. I have noticed a trend in the few erotic stories I've read, the man has a large penis and the woman usually has large (well-rounded in your story) breasts. I understand that this is your fantasy and I respect that, but isn't this perpetuating the idea that men and women need to be well endowed in order to be any good or attractive? You can see in many threads how pervasive the notion is in peoples' minds. Just a thought, but nicely done otherwise.
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Er...its actually based on my fiancée and my looks, right down to the dark red hair (dyed) and green eyes for the female character, and dark hair, brown eyes for the male. I wear a 36D bra, and his cock is slightly over 8 inches, I guess him and I are just lucky. I also made the comment that the female character has a "womanly" body, not some skinny anorexic girl like in porn and in the media, because well...thats how I am!
I'm glad you liked it though, nobody seemed to reply and I was starting to feel I was losing my touch as a writer
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