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Very well written and erotic. I have noticed a trend in the few erotic stories I've read, the man has a large penis and the woman usually has large (well-rounded in your story) breasts. I understand that this is your fantasy and I respect that, but isn't this perpetuating the idea that men and women need to be well endowed in order to be any good or attractive? You can see in many threads how pervasive the notion is in peoples' minds. Just a thought, but nicely done otherwise.
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